When I'm Gone

I'll despise you until I'm gone.
But when I'm gone, you'll remember me.
Because I'm going to be something great.
I'm going to accomplish my dreams
And most importantly, do everything you thought I couldn't.
I'm going to prove you wrong.
I'll be making a difference.
I'll be everything your not.
So scoff all you want for now,
But I'll be the one laughing at you
When I'm gone.

Author's Note

This is to someone who shall not be named.

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

This poem reminds me of Taylor Swift's song "Mean" a little bit. I love the poem though, it's beautifully written. Great job!

~Lizzard~

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A potboiler made fight to be better. A great message and outstanding use of words. It's lacks grammatical mastery, but all great art has it's imperfections, well done!