Will This Work?

I wrote this poem when i was afraid me and my bf were gonna brake up

Will this work?

I don't know,

it's braking my heart not to be sure.

I tell you i love you, you say ok,

I don't know what to do, do you believe what i say?

I wanna make you happy, I want you to smile,

I want you to feel what I feel every once in a while.

You're my dream come true and i love you so ,

but will this work out? I just don't know.

Reviews

[Rainbow Rider]

Very touching and real. It is nice to see people still writting poetry that rhymes. Just one thing, need you intend to use the "BRAKING" spelling, as to slow down or stop, and not the "BREAKING" spelling, as to break something? Just curious, and welcome to the Cafe.

[XeRa KrUsE]

it was about james,because i was having doubts if it would work or not..it scared me..i was thinkin bout that oen day and the poem came to mind

[..R.I.P..]

Hey babe, who's this poem about? I loved it, but I want to know who it's about.