Bipolar

Bipolar

A Poem by xlunalovex
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Basically my friend wrote this for me! He doesn't use this site but all reviews will be given to him!

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You come closer
I shudder

You come closer
I melt like butter

When you approach
I am bipolar

© 2010 xlunalovex


Author's Note

xlunalovex
Kinda short and more freestyle than anything else!

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I like this. (: when I read it I think like you hate someone more then anything but at the same time you love them and could never let them go. short, simple.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shudder, melt like butter... good feel about that bad feel. The flow to me was a little off but being bipolar is an off center flow.

Posted 11 Years Ago




short, simple, sweet and to the point, I love poems like that :]

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yes, it is short, but I like your choice of words. It has a lot of meaning and depth to it despite the length. Nice read. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Got your point across.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short and simple, yet still effective! I liked it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and simple. But I like it. Nice construction.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 17, 2010
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xlunalovex
xlunalovex

Philly, PA



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Hey. So about me? I am basically a shy, smart girl. I am in all honor classes which means during the school year I will be on writer's cafe once in a while. I usually write about darkness and rain. Lo.. more..

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