I Don't Miss You At All

I Don't Miss You At All

A Poem by xlunalovex
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This is a poem I made for my friend when she and her boyfriend broke up. Basically she was a normal girl who dated a nice emo boy who shunned her after his friends found out.

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Shy and innocent
That's what we were
I wanted our friendship
to extend far

You liked me
I liked you
We laughed
We cooed

They torn us apart
At the hips, we were
Once love was now hate
Crying wasn't the cure

We both parted
One last moment we kissed
I miss you now
Perhaps that's why I'm so pissed

© 2010 xlunalovex


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says a lot ,something most have encountered id say .

Posted 9 Years Ago


efficient and nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the emotion in this poem, and this type of situation is bound to happen. Girl likes boy, boy likes girl...friends disagree with the relationship, so they take action. I don't think this type of situation should be allowed to happen...I mean, if two people like eachother, they shouldn't care about what their friends think...

Posted 9 Years Ago


reflects the true emotions of a breakup...good job on this

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's short, it's excellently written, it's emotional. It's really good! I really like the story it told, and in so few words, too. Very well done on this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You tell this painful story so brilliantly... somehow making us all feel as if we know those feelings.. have been through love and loss. Very well done. So very sad....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sad. Good flow, great read. Short but gets the point and the emotion. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is precious until a heart is broken. It makes me sad. Loved the poem! Brings back memories... ;p

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good emotions :)
great words :)
Full on awesome :)

Please read and review my book im writting :) thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

perfect description of a first love that does not last. Very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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