Finally

Finally

A Story by xlunalovex
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just a short story I wrote for the troops and their families

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Eyes hungrily searching across the crowd tear up. Where is he? He is supposed to come today.
"James!" my voice calls out. "James where are you?!?" I called out into the crowd of cami cladded bodies. Tears well up in the still searching eyes.
"Mary!" I heard his velvet voice call. I turn and turn. Where is he? It is always the same question. Getting dizzy from turning and only seeing the army uniforms over and over again. I stop.
"James!" I call out to his face. He turns the other way, not noticing me. We were switching positions.
"Mary!" he booms. I push people out to get to him.
"Sorry. Oops. Sorry!" I shout over the screams and complaints of people. "James!" I yell again.
It felt like forever as I ran into his open and inviting arms.
"I missed you so damn much! Are you okay?" I said through tears and mumbled voices.
"It's okay babe. Calm down. Everything is fine. I missed you so much too." James told me. His eyes welled up in tears as he hugged me. His hand moved down to my belly. "How is the baby?" he asked.
"It's a girl." I said with laughter and smiles. He cries a little more before clutching me to him with his fingers in my hair.
Finally I get my husband back. Finally I get to hug and kiss him. No web cams or ocean in our way.

Thank you God.

© 2010 xlunalovex


Author's Note

xlunalovex
♥ This was meant to be short and sweet ♥

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This brought tears to my eyes, great work. This is a great tribute, it's has a perfect ending.

Posted 9 Years Ago


that's cute I like it!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Finally I get my husband back. Finally I get to hug and kiss him. No web cams or ocean in our way.

Thank you God.


Too many times I thought these exact same words. Thank you for this piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was short and sweet :) Good job.

~STR

Posted 9 Years Ago


Excellent. Great read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


So beautiful and sweet :) Great write x

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow. it was sweet and short. that is a powerful few words there lady. it brought a tear to my eye...

Posted 9 Years Ago


nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice! good description :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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xlunalovex
xlunalovex

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Hey. So about me? I am basically a shy, smart girl. I am in all honor classes which means during the school year I will be on writer's cafe once in a while. I usually write about darkness and rain. Lo.. more..

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