A Poem by Niki

just wrote this in the spur of the moment i'll spiff it up later.


Why is this feeling here,

what can it mean,

are you gonna leave me,

is it all gonna end,

its a feeling i hate,

i hate when its near,

ever time its felt,

bad seems to be coming,

around the corner,

down the street,

either way its close,

so close its knocking at your door,

its barging through,

destroying everything,

everything you once cherished,

now only pieces remain,

can they be put back together,

questions swam in your mind,

what happened,

will it change,

how and why,

the only thing i can say,

hearts will stray,

keep yours true,

i love you,

it may be hard to see,

but i'm here to stay,

so stay here with me?

© 2008 Niki

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NIce rhythm, but i didn't find a particular line that really stood out. Keep writing and maybe fifty years from now someone out there will recite a line and say, "I'm quoting Niki."

I so much am tired of relationships, it's too much work and I just don't have the interest any more. Your poem hit home so many times.

Posted 15 Years Ago

It's sucks not knowing if the person you love has the same feelings for you.
I enjoyed reading this piece

Great work!

Orlando M

Posted 16 Years Ago

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on February 24, 2008



Greenville, PA

I'm a senoir in high school. I love to hang out with people and meet awesome people. Reading is one of my favorite hobbies. I write poems and stories(sometimes songs). more..

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