Colors Of The Wind

A small sketch from my sketchbook put into words...

Colors Of The Wind, Rain

Frequency And Vibration

Flowing Through All Things 

A Mere Refraction Of Light.

"The way I see it, if you want a rainbow, you've got to put up with the rain." ~ Dolly Parton 

Reviews

[Bear]

As I get older and rain brings arthritic pain I have lost all fascination with rainbows so I now relay on writes like this so thank you. The title brings to mind Patrick Rothfuss book "The Name Of The Wind" and your poem could fit nice into the story. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Stacy Purvis]

Dear Bear, I do so enjoy your reviews. 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Great job! The poem is great! :)

[J Manuel]

I like how that caesura break comes into play in the first line followed by “Rain.” The rhythm goes well here as well as you reflect on the power of nature – “Flowing Through All Things.” I enjoy when so much is said with that sense of brevity, nicely done and much enjoyed, Thanks.

[aj milton]

I actually rather like the somewhat incongruous contrast between your words which have a simple yet profound feeling... and the quote from Dolly P which is so matter of fact and also simple but evokes a completely different response.

[Najam Us Saher]

Title of this poem reminds me of Pocahontas. It was a nice one.

[Ana Papaya]

That's awesome, love the brevity.
I do that too, paint and then try to write in words what the painting means to me.

[Jes' Pi]

Without rain there can't be a rainbow.
Without pain there can't be beauty.

Nice work!

[mercy party]

i really enjoyed this beautiful poem. Intricate yet simple in meaning. very nice! :)

[Surya]

I do have some attachment with rain so I liked it in other way than others, the rest described well and I liked it..

[matrixmark]

Quick and easy read.
You paint a very vibrant colorfult picture.
Dolly Parton Phrase - So very,very true.

Mark.