Trembling Minds

Trembling Minds

A Poem by Demii

Everything comes racing back,

running at me,

one at a time,

fast pacing attack


Trying to catch your breath,

but nearly aware,

dreams and the darkness among the air


Can I run? Can I hide?
In these dreams it won't define

Shaking with shivers from the roaring cold,
be scared is something I rather be outspokenly told


When the truth is hidden for sometime,

you sit and always wonder why?
Why, are people so inhumanly blind?


In the midst of staying astray,
I never wandered far,

they knew I'd stay


By the time I said my piece,
I didn't stay for they're release


I booked a flight and left on my own,
back to the place that was literally my home


After regaining myself again,

I allowed myself to feel the ken,

I felt the width to see the end
so the trend could never begin

© 2015 Demii


Author's Note

Demii
This is a quick piece I had written late. It's about a time when I was 15 and went through a decently rough time.

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This is a really good poem I enjoyed reading it. at one point you say "something I rather be" I think you mean "something I would rather be" or "something I'd rather be" other than this it was a very good poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


i think this is my favorite, beautifully written ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amazing. I really loved the way you wrote that. Keep it up. Thank you for sharing such a good poem. Love. ~Aru.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Demii

5 Years Ago

Thank's a lot for your feedback, and nice comment. :)
Very creative poetry you "had" written when you were way younger than already "young-er" you are. It's very heartfelt to read when the words seem to be belonged to some emotional heartaches-states brought by loves' to lives. Sometimes, it's hard to bear though it's true, everything's meant to be taught so is heart. Nice imagery!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

5 Years Ago

Thanks for your awesome feedback.
I like your perspective :)
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JC
I like the rapid flow of words and emotions, real and raw.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

5 Years Ago

Thank you!!
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Demii, I do not know exactly what you had to go through, but your heart bleeds on paper. You mentioned it was earlier in your life, and I am hoping that all is well with you now. Hugs!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

6 Years Ago

Awe wow, thanks a lot. I tried to portray it differently in sense, it was also 3 in the morning hah,.. read more
catching a breath seldom comes easy back then... we FEEL with caps and know we are invulnerable til the time we weren't.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

6 Years Ago

Exactly, thanks a bunch !
Nice! Rhyming was too good. keep writing Demii ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

6 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch :)!same to you!
"When the truth is hidden for sometime,

you sit and always wonder why?
Why, are people so inhumanly blind?"

bravo!!!!
beautifully written....
amazing poetry.....
i loved it......!!!
:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review and such kind words :)
Pushkar Prabhat

6 Years Ago

you are welcome!!!!! :) :)
You just wrote beautifully where I am at in my life right now, dreams and darkness among the air

Posted 6 Years Ago


Demii

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the lovely review! & yep sometimes things can be hard!

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"Challenges are what make life interesting and overcoming them is what makes life meaningful" My name is Demii, which is short for Demereace. I'm in my first year of college at Loyalist College. I'.. more..

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