Animal Instinct

Fingertips race through my hair

As you pull me in for a kiss.

A full kiss, but soft and light

Transforms into something purely animal.

We are the most beautiful animals if i ever saw them.

Smoothing back my hair

Hands wander up and down my arms

Your tongue ventures through my cave of 

Teeth sculptures.

You pull my trigger.

I pull you in closer.

Reviews

[Nessface]

It has a desperate intensity. So descriptive of lust. Nice work.

[Decdreams87]

Very sensational! (check spelling for "most")

[Jalaj Mishra]

Great

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

short, simple and direct a perfect piece, well done

[Mika Haruna]

a very discriptive poem, full of beatuiful imagry, very well done

[Helpless]

woow..... intense but very cool