A Poem by xJackie Mariex

my first poem written...

Through the smoke, she calls on me. 
To make my way across the flames, 
but while I froze not one among them knows,
and never can be told.
“Im free if that b***h dies.”
I’ve got to help her cut. 
“I need you” she calls,
but I can’t move. 
I’m frozen.
When I needed her, she wasn’t there. 
Why would I help her?
I’m frozen.
Over and over again,
in my head
“Im free if that b***h dies”
now I can move
so I do.
I move, 
Move away from her and the flames.
I’m frozen, 
she was my friend but now she’s gone,
Never to be seen again

© 2010 xJackie Mariex

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xJackie Mariex
for a first poem its one of my best i think...
reviews comments criticism always welcome

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Added on January 12, 2010
Last Updated on January 12, 2010


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