My Love

My Love

A Poem by ~DeathByButterflies~
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Heh, a love poem. Something I wouldn't usually write, but here goes nothing...

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This is what I fight for,
This is what I breathe for,
This life, this touch,
Unlike any other.
No one ever touched my heart this way,
No one ever made me feel as such.
Now I'm lost to you
In an undying love,
Lost so far,
A small flying dove.
I never felt this way before,
Never knew this feeling,
But whenever I'm with you,
My heart skips beating.
Maybe if you knew
What I'd do for you,
Maybe if you saw
That yes, I love you too,
The world wouldn't be so cold,
We could see it all anew.
There wouldn't have to be anyone else,
For this life,
I am okay,
As long as it's me and you...
For today,
I am okay,
As long as forever you're here to stay.

© 2011 ~DeathByButterflies~


Author's Note

~DeathByButterflies~
Let me know what you think, whether it's good or just plain horrible.

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very beautiful and romantic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its far from horrible its terrific, it shows what love can do to you, and how sometimes you cant live without that one person, fabulous job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not really. i just write how i feel, and it just goes from there. if my poems are any good, i don't know how they came to be that way...

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderful work brittany, i've always envied your skills. you are a natural born poet

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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~DeathByButterflies~
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I guess you could say I'm just a kid that likes to write poetry. I'm little more than that, really. I write how I feel, and feel how I write. It may not always be the best decision, or the best writin.. more..

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