New, Improved and Ineffective

New, Improved and Ineffective

A Poem by Rachel Knight

new, improved and ineffective. loved. yellow yarn.
engendered and defended by commas or hoardes and hoardes of full and complete stops
bus stop blue and the bench stopped turning
revolving bench
revolving tree
revolving right side of

and how!

the master’s teacup is chipped into a perfect topographical depiction of new hampshire.
i ski it on the andes side
 

© 2009 Rachel Knight


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You're nuts! But delightfully so.

Title drew me into this...first line syllababbles along nicely ... and the last two lines had me shuffling on my chair as a sense of amused approval took my mind off how I've not really done much today.

Are you English? Do American's use the term full-stop? Hmm, but you spelled centre center elsewhere, so you can't be. Not that it matters.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 17, 2009
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