Lonely

Lonely

A Poem by Natalia
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"Her pain comes from being lonely"

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The dull ache begins in her chest

And travels down to her toes,

She curls up until she's compressed,

Then the tears come and they flow

 

Her pain comes from being lonely,

The ones she love are far away,

The place she is at is not homely

And she fears what happens if she must stay

 

Then a light appears before her

And reminds her hope is real,

She remembers love that was before a blur

And recalls that time can heal

 

She slowly gets up off the floor

With a renewed sense of light,

Life will not tear her down like before,

Now she won't give up without a fight

© 2013 Natalia


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I loved your IInd stanza and the last stanza. I can feel the pain, the hurt of love right into the bottom of heart.. the pain in chest .. that pours the drops of tears right in/onto the face. I liked the theme, it's a very emotional poem that's about a breaking heart... A heartfelt poem. Nice work, Nat.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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You are so amazing, never stop doing what you love! You have such a knack in connecting with passion and putting it in a form that we all can see!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natalia

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading and your kind words!
What can i say that more learned men could have said already. I liked this, but there was something to be held back, am I wrong, or was there more you wanted to convey?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Natalia

7 Years Ago

Maybe a little... You made me think really hard about your comment... I think maybe I could have con.. read more
Bravo! Love this, and especially the end message; never give up!

Thanks for the share.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved your IInd stanza and the last stanza. I can feel the pain, the hurt of love right into the bottom of heart.. the pain in chest .. that pours the drops of tears right in/onto the face. I liked the theme, it's a very emotional poem that's about a breaking heart... A heartfelt poem. Nice work, Nat.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 1, 2013
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Tags: #loneliness, #sadness, #hope

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Natalia

VA



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Hi, my name is Natalia and I'm 2o years old. I am a college student in and live in Virginia near Washington D.C. I absolutely love love love music, reading, writing, movies, drawing, and especially tr.. more..

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