Another Mans Arms

Another Mans Arms

A Poem by EnternalNight
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Forever yours

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You smile at me.
But you don't understand,
The way it hurts
Knowing all I can do is understand.

You stand by his side.
Smiling,
I know your happy.
So I'll stay here on the side lines,
Thinking of what could be.

But I'd rather be here.
As your friend...
So you can tell me anything,
I'll understand.

So I'll stay here.
And never tell you I love you...
So I can stand here,
And watch you be in Another Mans Arms.

© 2010 EnternalNight


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wow, i can feel the pain in this one.
but just so you know, sometimes girls feel a lot closer to the guy that they are "best friends" with than the guy that they are in a relationship with.
many guys think that they are going to ruin a good friend ship if they tell the girl that they have feelings for them but thats not always true.
i think you should tell her how you feel. girls would rather know the truth than have you hide your feelings and than find out years later. she may have the same feelings for you. and if she doesn't, that doesn't mean she wont still want you as a best friend, but at least she will know. just my opinion. great poem though! i think this is a very romantically tragic subject.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I agree with Angelina down there!

This is definitely a painful write and I love it. It holds so much meaning and sorrow and yeah.. definitely love it. (: Hope everything's alright between you and whoever this is...unless ur just writing to write. Love it, samsam

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow, i can feel the pain in this one.
but just so you know, sometimes girls feel a lot closer to the guy that they are "best friends" with than the guy that they are in a relationship with.
many guys think that they are going to ruin a good friend ship if they tell the girl that they have feelings for them but thats not always true.
i think you should tell her how you feel. girls would rather know the truth than have you hide your feelings and than find out years later. she may have the same feelings for you. and if she doesn't, that doesn't mean she wont still want you as a best friend, but at least she will know. just my opinion. great poem though! i think this is a very romantically tragic subject.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful write. I enjoyed this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow. awesome poem. Very amazing!! It flows nicely, just wonderful work. I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2010
Last Updated on December 26, 2010
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