All By Myself

All By Myself

A Poem by EnternalNight

The way I'm feeling

Don't you see
I've mended my heart all by myself
I told you I could...
Even if it hurt
I did it all by myself
It took a long time
Because you see
My heart was in a lot of pieces
It wont hurt as much anymore
Yes I know the stitches are a little messy
But you see
I did it by myself...
My wings were broken
So was my halo
But you see I fixed them to
Now ones white and ones black
Aren't you proud
I wont seem broken anymore...
Why are you crying?
Did I mend it the wrong way?
why are you hugging me so tight?
Did I worry you again?
I'm sorry
For I don't understand your tears
Sorry if I seem like I'm hurting
I'm sorry if i do cuz the stitches aren't very good
Because you see
I mended my heart all by myself....

© 2010 EnternalNight

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this is such a sad write, but it is very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago

great work, but one should beable to pick themselves up in a time of darkness and find what we all truely need and want, love

Posted 11 Years Ago

wonderful poem sam. Very well written. Sad but yet hopeful, wonderful work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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This is SO cute. ^^ I don't know why, it just is. And yes, it's definitely creative. Definitely sad, but ...idk, hopeful? too. ^^ Love it, samsam.

Posted 11 Years Ago

i think this is really cool, very creative!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on December 10, 2010
Last Updated on December 10, 2010
Tags: hurt, sad, thinking, heart, heart break, broken, mending, crying




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