My New Beginning

My New Beginning

A Poem by EnternalNight
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I've been down for awhile...
Well more like forever
But I'm over the pain
And I've decided to put a smile on my face
Pick myself up
And take the first step

Leaving you in my past
I wont let you hurt me anymore
Because I've done the hardest thing

I wont hate you back
So take all your lies 
And look me in the eyes
Do you see someone who believes you anymore?

So before I go
I just have to let you know
I think I deserve 
My new beginning 

© 2011 EnternalNight


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LOVE IT!!! I think this poem is absolutely amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago


love it. this is like what i am going through right now, so i really relate to this poem. very well done i must say!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The last stanza is well done. Taking back the power in your life and not letting someone hurt you anymore. this poem speaks of past pain and moving in a positive direction. I am right with you on this. Moving forward after four years. Long story but this poem really hit home with me right now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love how lately everyone has been writing about their newly found inner strength! its fantastic and so inspirational!! i think you deserve a new beginning too- everyone does! and thats what i just realized this year, its my goal to be more positive this year!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the emotion you display in this poem. You can really feel what I think you want the reader to feel.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I would dedicate that to my ah... ex-best friend. And my ex bf. Oh yes. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 8, 2011
Last Updated on January 8, 2011
Tags: New, Beginning, pain, smile, forever, first, step, happiness

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