Taken

Taken

A Poem by potato

Taken,
By the hate that simmers,
Just under the surface

Taken,
By sweet revenge,
That I could never give

Taken,
By the thoughts,
Of everything in the universe

Taken,
By the secrets I hold,
Of my past,present,and future

I have been taken.......

© 2014 potato


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wow. very powerful. short, yet powerful. and good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Small yet powerful.. To the point. It's beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Nice writting. I really like short poems. Just Like the one im reading now.:-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
u say a lot through hidden words, cheers!

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Oh,why thank you.
well written, your use of repetition here really helps reinforce your ideas... simple yet powerful.. construction and flow are very nice as well.. good job...

there is hidden truth behind each stanza that reaches out and grabs the reader.... those secrets do take a piece of your soul...

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Why,thank you. I like to write poems with repetition.
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

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Added on August 10, 2014
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Tags: taken, take, hate, secret, revenge, past, present, future

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I love to write,I always have. Writing has always been my escape to my own little world and out of the terrifying one I was living in. I love to write fiction,but with some true stories of my life and.. more..

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