Everlasting

Everlasting

A Poem by potato

The pain,
So strong and tough,
I really think I've had enough,
The pain,
Everlasting

The grief,
That never lets go,
And brings more emotions in tow,
The grief,
Everlasting

The anger,
Of so many days,
Spent lost in his maze,
The anger,
Everlasting

The sadness,
Shown in my eyes,
I can no longer hide from you guys,
The sadness,
Everlasting

Everlasting,
Are these emotions,
Like a sip from each and every potion,
Everlasting......

© 2014 potato


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Very dark. I do indeed love this poem. And this is coming from a 15 year old...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful. Just wonderful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It's really good, I love the structure of the few word lines strung together. One grammar question - did you mean to say "hide" it from you guys? The first part says "can" which is present, and "hid" is past... maybe just a slip of typing?

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2014
Last Updated on August 29, 2014
Tags: grief, anger, pain, sadness, emotion, everlasting

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I love to write,I always have. Writing has always been my escape to my own little world and out of the terrifying one I was living in. I love to write fiction,but with some true stories of my life and.. more..

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