Drift Through

Drift Through

A Poem by youngkingkwan
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A Moment Too Soon

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If forever is a concept,

Then a concept is forever,

How long would forever be,

If time we didn't measure,

Time speed seems to fluctuate,

Relevant to the being,

Even though it happens now, 

The past is what you're seeing,

But time is quick, time is slow,

Time is of the essence,

The future's undetermined,

So my time is in the present,

The seconds are unstoppable,

And hours are a certainty,

Pause it all with just a kiss,

Then drift into eternity,

© 2015 youngkingkwan


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great thoughts and flow with a fun rhyme. you've tagged it as motivation. I feel it. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, many times I have said time is measured internally by awareness not a clock. When you are one year old a month is 1/12 of your life and when your 10 a month is 1/120 of your life. Every year older a day seems to go by faster because it is because of our awareness of time. Now i will have to add this to my thinking and reevaluate my understanding, thank you and I have said to you before I love when something makes me think. Well done :~)

Posted 8 Years Ago


youngkingkwan

8 Years Ago

Thank you again for your gracious comment. Time is such a precious thing, and people forget how fast.. read more

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Added on August 2, 2015
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Tags: poem, time, short, deep, motivation

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youngkingkwan
youngkingkwan

Brandon, Manitoba, Canada



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I've been writing poetry and lyrics for several years. I'm looking to number one share my thoughts through words with other interested people, and two hopefully get some effective feedback and/or comm.. more..

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