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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Rain's Renewal

Rain's Renewal

A Poem by youngkingkwan
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It Only Beats Quicker

"
A tender heart beats,
Rumble in the thunderclouds, 
How precious the sound, 

© 2015 youngkingkwan


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youngkingkwan
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Very precious! Indeed! Nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"Rumble in the thunderclouds" is almost onomatopoetic, I really like that line.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

youngkingkwan

8 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
I like how this sounds like a protector overlooking someone they love dearly, very sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

youngkingkwan

8 Years Ago

I didn't write it that way but it definitely can work in that view. Thanks for the new perspective o.. read more

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Added on August 10, 2015
Last Updated on August 10, 2015
Tags: poem, haiku, rain, thunder

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youngkingkwan
youngkingkwan

Brandon, Manitoba, Canada



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I've been writing poetry and lyrics for several years. I'm looking to number one share my thoughts through words with other interested people, and two hopefully get some effective feedback and/or comm.. more..

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