Look Around

Look Around

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Dedicated to Tony Jordon. This will have to do for now ;)

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Whenever you cry,
whenever you fall,
look around -
I am here,
at a moment's call.

Feeling sad?
Feeling down?
Look around -
I am here,
won't let you drown.
 
Make a wish,
don't be shy,
look around -
I am here,
just give it a try.


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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I haven't seen Tony around here in years! Is he still active? I love your poem becuz of the quiet timid sound of these reassurances. Sometimes people who talk a big show are never actually THERE for a person. That's why the quiet promise feels more genuine to me. Nice rhyme & rhythm, too (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Tony is certainly inactive around here, but he's one of the very few on WC who I'm in contact with p.. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

I'm glad you're still in contact . . .



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I haven't seen Tony around here in years! Is he still active? I love your poem becuz of the quiet timid sound of these reassurances. Sometimes people who talk a big show are never actually THERE for a person. That's why the quiet promise feels more genuine to me. Nice rhyme & rhythm, too (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Tony is certainly inactive around here, but he's one of the very few on WC who I'm in contact with p.. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

I'm glad you're still in contact . . .
Strange how people alter over time,. how what was once sweet talk becomes bitter bile! And yet you've always been a cure-all, Yumna, turning the other cheek whilst being there.. always. Blessings and just a few wishes..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Strange indeed. I do intend to remain the same for the ones I'm close to and I'm glad to have made s.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

We're all children - and should be - deep inside, Yumna and there's no sin in that. After all, when .. read more
And here I am looking around

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Oh well, you know... ;)
Great tribute to solid friendship - expressed in a simplistic poetic style!
اچھا لکھا گیا

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Years Ago

I am not proficient - but know a few expressions!
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Cool! You will definitely know this then,
شكريّة 😇
Phill Oz O'fee

3 Years Ago

And ... thank you as well!
Simple, friendly poem, I will give a try, haha..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Hey, thank you! It's all the matter of finding the right ones 😊
You are true to your word Yumna - you are there for your friends. Such wonderful sentiments. I deeply appreciate this lovely gesture. I am humbled.
I hope your day has went well..?
:))

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

3 Years Ago

We always get the neggy news - what positive things are we missing out on? :))
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Haha yeah I know that! Media shows it like they want people to know..
You've seriously got m.. read more
Tony Jordan

3 Years Ago

There are a few countries who we only hear the negative news from - Russia and Cuba and China among .. read more
Elegantly captured and calming poetry.
Well done! Cheers!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tazeen, for the nice words and appreciation 😊
Indeed, simple, graceful and beautiful in its sentiments.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, John Alexander! I appreciate it 😊
A simple and beautiful assurance to a friend. Appreciated all the more as try I could I can't promise to be there always for even my closest friends, being moody and feckless by nature. Tony is a great person and writer and he deserves all the love and support. Great going YumnaKay!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I've always meant to be there for those I care about. And TJ is one of those people.
I agree.. read more
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

Its an exceptional human quality. One thats truly admirable. You are welcome 😊
These look like they could be song lyrics. Maybe you could try putting some music to them?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thats what I thought. But unfortunately I have no idea how that works. Thanks for the review ☺

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