Look Around

Dedicated to Tony Jordon. This will have to do for now ;)

Whenever you cry,

whenever you fall,

look around -

I am here,

at a moment's call.

Feeling sad?

Feeling down?

Look around -

I am here,

won't let you drown.

 

Make a wish,

don't be shy,

look around -

I am here,

just give it a try.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I haven't seen Tony around here in years! Is he still active? I love your poem becuz of the quiet timid sound of these reassurances. Sometimes people who talk a big show are never actually THERE for a person. That's why the quiet promise feels more genuine to me. Nice rhyme & rhythm, too (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Tony is certainly inactive around here, but he's one of the very few on WC who I'm in contact with personally :D
I haven't checked up on this little piece for ages, so your review brought back early memories from my time in here. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, BG. Hugs back

[barleygirl]

I'm glad you're still in contact . . .

[Adam Adams]

you talk good here. seems, you be a holy moly goddess who craves to spread love, lights, and peace around the world... in the wake of love at all. quite an inspirational poetry you licked in!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That depends on the mood, doesn't it? Our poetry defines what we are feeling at the time. Thank you for reviewing ☺

[Adam Adams]

yeah... it, of course, depends. next time, tell me, when you're in horny mood. okay? xoxo (kidding)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol seriously 😂😂

[Adam Adams]

again it depends on "your" mood how you wanna take on this. haha!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ofcourse 😉

[Giulia King]

This is such a sweet poem! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much Gullia! I'm glad you liked it. ☺

[aLittlePain]

Good friends, like this are precious! We must look after those relationships. Lovely piece. R xo

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much Rach, for the kind review :)

[Lorry]

Beautiful words, that need to be heard by someone, to know that they are not alone in the world. I hope you are heard by them my friend.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you! I intend to be heard ☺

[PhoenixDown]

A wonderful offer from a beautiful soul.
We need people like you.

Phoenix

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much Pheonix for the compliment. I appreciate your kind words ☺

[PhoenixDown]

You are most welcome.

[Hi]

This is simple and fanciful, but all need this sentiment at times.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Indeed yes, and thank you for the review :)

[Gurharmanpreet]

Look around... It gives such a postive vibe... Having tge assurance of someone being there for us is one of the best feelings... Beautiful words.. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you! Indeed yes, the reassurance we get when we know that someone has our back is comforting to the utmost degree. ☺

[wordman]

a good friend is hard to come by

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are right. It does take time finding the right one.

[Wondering Mind]

A sweet song, penned with a soft reassuring voice.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for liking and reviewing ☺

[Gray]

This sounds spiritual in nature, giving the one reading a sense of comfort and assurance. Thanks for sharing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for the kind words Grey! I am glad you liked it. ☺