Desires

Becoming wild..

Burning desires 

creeping up my veins,

fluttering heart, 

no longer in chains ...

Oh, why so surprised?

No, I'm not on cocaine.

This is the real me, 

no longer with restrains.

Come f**k me, 

'cause I'm already fucked up ...

until my brain ~ drains.

Reviews

[D Connolly]

This is definitely a change from some of your other poetry; I was a little shocked at your use of the word "f**k" because I so rarely see it. I'm curious about the language you've used in a few parts. "Burning desire" paired with the "no I'm not on cocaine". If you would, why did you choose those specific words? This is a nice departure for you, though I do like your softer side too :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well that departure from the normal was brought by the fact that I wanted to try my hand in every genre of writing.. Not sure if it worked.. About that word of 'cocaine' and 'f**k', well just me being on the playful and wild side 😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing this piece! This means alot ☺

[Neville]

Shame but at least a taste of freedom is better than no taste at all.........N

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hm well yes..😊

[Ted Kniffen]

Top marks for doing something wildly different than normal. It is good to step outside the safety zone and stretch your wings. Good write.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Ted! It was good to be wild for once 😉
I'm glad you liked it ☺

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That's quite a shift from what I've come to know of you..great though. Fierce and quite hot ; ) an awesome freeing voice and maybe even thought behind this. I really enjoyed this piece. Starz x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

To tell you the truth, I got inspired by you to write this... I'm glad you liked it! Thank you ☺

[...]

What a lovely compliment
: ) that instantly lifted my morning. Thank you friend x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad!☺

[An owl on the moon]

There is a sense of shaking off the dust and beginning to dance into the wildness of midnight flowing through your thoughts. May you never feel held back from being the real you, and more each day. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, C! Though I shudder to think of the day when that happens, still thank you for the nice wishes☺
Thank you for reviewing this one ☺

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, well, perhaps becoming "YOU" will be a most wondrous, beautiful lifelong journey, dear poet, and not one done in a single leap. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Probably yes.. Thanks again ☺

[Lorry]

Nice. Sometimes we just have to let the beast out of its restraints and run wild and scream for a while. It's a good place to be, burning off all that energy and restraint into aggression and wildness of freedom barely dreamed of. When calmed, looking back at being unleashed, a smile will always pass your lips at the knowledge that you can be free again when you choose. Sometimes we just have to feel that heart beat wildly to feel alive :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree! The mind is when caged thinks of ways to set itself free and when it does..this is what comes out :p
Thank you for your thoughts on this! Really appreciate it :)

[Lorry]

You're always welcome :)

[Giulia King]

Ohh this was hot! Short but yet so powerful. I love that you can write about different things and not just about sweet love. Something I need to learn how to do haha!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Gullia, you can too! Just recognize your inner self and let the words flow... Btw I was in too much of a playful mood when I wrote this 😉 but I'm glad you found it hot 😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing this one 😊

[Jibey]

I loved the wildness of this... the burning desire and the strength of the word 'f**k'... so expressive ... and so good to know that you can cast off all restraints... making you a wonderful lover

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thankyou, Jibey! It feels good to be wild once in awhile!😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺

[YanZeros]

Its December but it feels like hot Summer so passionate Yumna lovin' this poetry!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ahh well, I'm embarrassed that you read this :p
This was just me being a wildcat :D
Thankyou for liking and reviewing this piece :)

[YanZeros]

You are welcome :) some/most of my poetry are embarrassing too! Good thing we can hide ourselves in our pen names! Thanked God who invented poetry and pen names!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahaha yeah whoever did is a saint indeed 😂