Someone Like You

Someone Like You

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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For Ricco aka YanZeros on WC, my newfound friend and the best I could ever have :)

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                   You may have met a thousand like me 
                         But never before have I met 
                                Someone like you 
                          
                            You want to know why
                  'Cause there maybe thousands ready
                           To listen to your rambles 
                               But no one for me 
                                For that, I want
                               Someone like you 

                         Who would listen endlessly 
                                To my rambles?  
                          Unflinching, unwavering 
                    Always with a good advice or two 
                                      Except
                               Someone like you
 
                        With occasional flirtations 
                                From your side 
                     And silly flatterings from me 
                            I wish this friendship 
                            Remains the way it is. 
                           'Cause finally I realized 
                               I never will have 
                              Someone like you 
                             (Though you might)


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This is the first piece which I really have written from my heart.

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I can tell it's from your heart. Best things can come out of ones heart. Alot of mine are from my heart in some ways or another, whole or partly. Much enjoyed reading this wonderful piece. Such true feelings exude from it. Would we all want someone like that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Haha it's good being bad in actual but not so when it's online on sites like these! 😉
BlackRose

3 Years Ago

Well, not on here depending that's true. In actual, who cares, haha!
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Hahaha true indeed! 😛



Reviews

DAMN I LOVE EVERY BIT OF IT.
wow, i can connect.
congratulation for this beautiful creation

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Sad smile? This wasn't supposed to be sad 😛
APOORVA

3 Years Ago

no no you creation is amazing undoubtedly :)
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Well, thanks again ☺
Beautiful, kind and gentle words. I liked them.
"Someone like you "
The above words. Hold powerful meaning. We need the people who make us feel good. Thank you dear poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Yes, I agree! We need more good people in our lives..
Thank you so much for the appreciation!.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I liked the poem and you are welcome dear friend.
Sounds like being in the friend zone. Or maybe just wanting to preserve a great friendship with someone you fell in love with and he doesn't reciprocate. Not usually my cup of tea, but it's good.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Do I have to change your mind on that? 😂😛
Lovecraft

3 Years Ago

No, I'm quite intelligent, but socializing and stuff like that is NOT my forte, lol.
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Haha same here 😉
Writing this kind of stuff doesn't mean one is like that too, you know �.. read more
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From the heart and soul, not from books or those that think they know, is where the truest words are born and spread wings to the hearts and souls of others to do the most good.
...and this is one of those pieces that read simple on the surface to the masses but claw down deep in the ones it touches.
Thanks for the share

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Yes, I agree! But at the same time it's difficult to really open up to what you feel..
Thank .. read more
I read this somewhere -
"Friendships must be built on a solid foundation of alcohol, sarcasm, inappropriateness, and shenanigans."
I think it's a very good examination of what makes a good friendship. (alcohol is optional) lol.

Good friendships are hard to come by - I pray you two work equally towards keeping it alive and real.



Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I agree! Sarcasm is the main thing in the best of friendships! Lol alcohol is out of option 'cause .. read more
Tony Jordan

3 Years Ago

Welcome :D
I can tell it's from your heart. Best things can come out of ones heart. Alot of mine are from my heart in some ways or another, whole or partly. Much enjoyed reading this wonderful piece. Such true feelings exude from it. Would we all want someone like that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Haha it's good being bad in actual but not so when it's online on sites like these! 😉
BlackRose

3 Years Ago

Well, not on here depending that's true. In actual, who cares, haha!
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Hahaha true indeed! 😛
Barley girl advises you well... great piece.. full of new feelings.. Of wonder and mystery, whatever it turns out to be.. ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Lol I think it turned out okay already 😉
Thank you ☺
Lovely poem!
I could feel through your thoughts...

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Tazeen! I'm glad you like it ☺
Love this, Yumna! It's so sweet :) I feel like we're a bunch of friends here at WritersCafe, supporting each other forever

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Yeah I feel blessed to have such friends as you and Ric! ☺
Thank you for liking this one, .. read more
Giulia King

3 Years Ago

I'm blessed to have you in my life :)
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

That's sweet of you! ☺💜
Thank you 😊
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This is beautiful, warm rich and so sincere...it emanates the feelings of contentment in good friends. Such a lovely read my friend, makes me smile. Starz x

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I feel lucky to have you as a friend too ☺
Thank you for liking this on.. read more

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