Till Death Do Us Apart

I suck at love poems :p

I love you

I love you too

I miss these words

coming from you

while we didn't even look

at each other

when I would be looking at the sky 

searching for the brightest star

to ask what I wished the most

you

Only to find

you lookin' right at me 

'cause maybe you found it

in my very eyes

what you wished for

me

And we vowed

till death do us apart

and that it did 

you've been afar for too long

but like a constant ache

that never subsides

because

Pain demands to be felt

and that I feel

constantly reminding me

that maybe 

we would still have been together 

this valentine's day...

Author's Note

I wanted this to be a valentine's day special.. Apparently didn't work lol

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

There is no feeling that is sweeter than looking into someone's eyes and seeing a reflection of your own love there.
But somewhere along the road things go wrong and we are left with sorrow and regrets.
The pain of your words are so evident in this beautiful poem.
I wish you all the best for the coming Valentine's day.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I intended to right a normal love poem but it didn't work that way.. But it's good to know you could feel the emotions here! Thank you so much for liking and reviewing this piece, Shabeeh! Means a lot ☺

[Shabeeh Haider]

All poems written from the heart are "normal"'.
What ever the theme of your poem, the love is evident and you are celebrating that love.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Quite a perspective! I appreciate that..

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Very much agree shabeeh

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you T J for agreeing

[deborah]

oops it is so romantic ,you put it in a way that makes me to feel like telling all that to someone

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hey, thank you so much Debora! Truly appreciate your words! ☺

[deborah]

welcome,,alot