Promise Me

Promise Me

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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In Response to Vanessa's (Βανέσα) poem "Being" Inspired....

"
If you promise 
never 

To leave 
my side 

Sharing
 
with me 
the burden 

of my 
broken shoulders 


If you promise 
never 

To leave 
my side 

Until the night's 
ascending 

Into a new dawn 


If you promise 
never 
 
To leave 
my side 
 
In this 
whole world of 

miseries 



Then 
 
I would 
Let you 

Be.


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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' f you promise ~ never ~ To leave ~ my side ~
Sharing .. '

Tis hard to leave someone's side when promises have been made somewhere else. Who's ever to know. There's both sadness and hope in this.. sometimes the two don't walk hand in hand.

A superb post, a very rational yet sensvtive way of being that not everyone has and some are too blind to accept.. .

(please forgive my typos. so very careless)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'd say promises are harder kept but made easily enough...
Thank you for appreciating, Em. T.. read more



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Expectations from our loved people . Very relatable. Very well penned, Yumnakay.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Bala, for the kind words and appreciation. 😊
Bala Gorthi

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Wow, this speaks to me mi cherié. It gives off a more wistful vibe so many promises....either way it goes I liked it. Great job

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend! I'm glad you liked it. 😊
mmmm so many things we want them to promise...
isnt it... i can relate to these words quiet well...
simple yet sweet poem yumna...
but i guess promises are always meant to be broken.... some or the other day mostly by the ones you love and hold close to you..
what do you think

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I would say it depends on the situations of that person too. Many a times, we don't want to break pr.. read more
Ardra

3 Years Ago

mmmm :) ya maybe ... depends on who makes the promise and their intention behind it too...
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

True......

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