Invisible To You

Invisible To You

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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A sequel to "Shield"

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Invisible to you 
Standing there in front of you
Yet your eyes see right 
through me.
Blurred, broken images form 
In my eyes
From the night when you said,
"It's all over, 
there is no 'us',
just 'you' and 'me', going our separate ways"

And I accept it. This numbing, yet ever present pain which resides in me like a malignant disease,
to which there is no cure.

And I accept it. This fate, a gift by you, the last thing that I'll have, 
that although I never moved from your sight 
yet I'm
Invisible to you...


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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It's a sad thing when this happens to us, and can be very tough to deal with. But it is also better to have loved than never to have loved at all. (It means nothing at the time but as time goes by, we heal and start to reflect on things differently)

These moments happen to many of us. Yes...it breaks us down, but also it makes us stronger.

Some perfect choice of words in this piece. Well done....

Mark.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I agree. Time is the best healer.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here and for the appre.. read more
matrixmark

3 Years Ago

No worries, always a pleasure.
Mark.



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Ah, yet are you truly not visible to the eyes of those who are blind? If their eyes are shut, they will never see you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

It's all about perception. One truly doesn't have to close their eyes to stop seeing anyone..
beautiful piece. very true, sometimes we feel so invisible. keep it up! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I agree, we do. Thank you for your thoughts here and for liking :)
CherryEllie

3 Years Ago

no problem. definitely deserved it :)
Wow, I can relate to this so much. This one really hit me. Beautiful what these small, but o so meaningfull storys can do to a man. Lovely!


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm humbled by your appreciation of my words. It means a lot :)
Invisible to you
Standing there in front of you
Yet your eyes see right
through me.
Blurred, broken images form
In my eyes....
..was the part i liked, you be surprised nothing goes past these eyes.. lmao...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
This was a beautiful piece, I really enjoyed it my lady, thanks for sharing

Poeticme

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed 😊
Interesting title and poem too. Many physical feel invisible, though their really not! Powerful poem, something so many can relate to. Well explained and easy to understand. I enjoyed the read. Tyfs

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Cyprian, for your thoughts and for liking! I appreciate it 😊
Cyprian Van Dyke

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)
Love is the most beautiful yet ugliest emotion . The wonder and warmth of it can turn on a coin, here, gone, leaving such wretchedness. I guess we all have to suffer the hurt in order to have had the wretchedness.. if only...

Your post is painful to read yet superbly expressed.. you've melded emotion to literary style so very well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I think it depends on us as to which way to turn it.
Thank you, Emma, for the appreciation an.. read more
...awesome photography!

The pain inflicted does feel much like a malignancy...so much so that we need to dissect it from our life.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I quite agree with you. Thank you so much, Kelly, for the appreciation 😊
This is so sad but beautifully written! I think many people can relate to this. You're always doing the right things to the wrong person.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

This wasn't written from my perspective but from the other side.
Thank you, Gullia for the ap.. read more
To encounter relationship without understanding is hardship :/ I.I.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the wise words. I appreciate it 😊
Isabella Ivy

3 Years Ago

My pleasure! :)

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