Glassless Windows

Glassless Windows

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental.

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They say:
"Eyes are the windows 
to one's soul."

But my windows;
they're glassless,
with only a frame.

I let you see,
what I want
to be seen.

And I avert
my eyes away
from your face.

Because the darkness
of my soul ...
would consume you

~ whole ~ 


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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Dr. YumnaKay
Edited version.

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Glassless.... Ah. Very nice. A nice poem, Yumna. Does this mean the glass of your eyes have already been shattered prior to this poem? I'd make a greek mythology reference but ah, theyre boring anyways. Sigh. Idk why, i just like this. Too relateable.... Sigh. :(

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

Ah well it just reminded me of a couple myths (when you said turn away) it reminded me of Orpheus an.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Uh. I already know a little about that narcissus myth but the first one is interesting too ;)
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Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

Thank you thank you



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"the darkness
of my soul would
consume you whole" I looove those lines!
It's better to have glass-less windows than to cover them with rose colored glasses :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Rightly said! Thank you so much 😊
"because, the darkness of my soul would consume u whole"
It created a strong impact..

Nice poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it 😊
I like this piece. Nice work.

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it 😊
Nice write, better to be a soul with depth than a window that's reflective. The eyes do have this soul attachment having a black iris. And we do show what we like to show.

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I find it quite interesting to deceive people into believing what they see 😉
Thank you, A.. read more
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V
Interesting perception. Reminds me of see-through eyes but controlled by the possessor not by the observer. Nicely penned seems still a little raw to be honest but it's a lovely basis for a good poem.
Again nice image you chose for your piece. I stay away from adding images as I want the readers to create their own ones.. But my mind is always so full of intense imagery, I often think more than in others...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Hahaha no! It wasn't you! It was the fact that people here thought either I'm totally lovesick or go.. read more
V

2 Years Ago

Hm ok sorry I couldn't be your muse 😒lol. 😛

I agree to your words and now I'll .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Haha okay 😛😂

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