Blame, Hearts, Poems and Brokenness...

Blame, Hearts, Poems and Brokenness...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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In Collaboration with Silente...

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White-flames light gray names on the wall of shame, while pain is believed to be the seed of greed that fillets our brains
...Seamlessly... 
Vile release of craving and I scream, the butterfly sting of transparent opiates leave me stinger-less like a male honey bee, fails, money-trees, and right-of-way...
The way crawls of chaos-dust laced with lunar-graves, fight the lay-away sensation of a crow eating your fate, and sashay away...
 Princess of blame.

As an unknown band of a faraway land in the sands of time, caught betwixt the greasy slime of sublime thyme, rang out in brain-dead rhyme, I strive to achieve the hectic highs and lows of a life spent otherwise, but now time flies
 ...No compromise... 
Just a vague realization of recreational hallucination, manipulation coupled with ruffled mixtures of pictures engraved on the inside of my grave, reenactment of Satan's chimes as my mind lulls blindly, in fact dulls the excruciating pain... 
As you, Prince of my demise.
 Still rule my heart faintly...

Faintly or not, I'm not a saint, the hearts in the paint, and a swathe of harm comes from loving a card taint
As a lark starts to sing for me, but no sound abounds, tempting duress
 ...I simmer...
 My nouns are thin and drowning in a sea of crowns, my pain surrounds my frown, but still I round out syllables
Hard-turned gullible, silk worth drivel, I use a felt-tipped stain to melt my syllabus like veal
 Heal the wilting flower, still ripping hours, that powerful sensation of dripping sour dirt, my earth is shattered and lurching to the side of orbit...
 Hope you know it...
Princess of poets.

Oh don't I know it, blame, hearts, poems and brokenness...
 Swimming in deep waters and lapping around murky weed hopelessly, I refuse to admit defeat sordidly 
 Sorta crawling back, while 
...Again and again...
 Thrown into the ocean's heft, what are you besides an empty vessel, wherein a figment of my imagination lies, while a glimmer of hope sparks, making me look up to the skies
I withdraw from this state of non-being to a universe full of calamity, yet my soul searches, still reaches out to you...
Sweet Prince of broken screams.
Only you...


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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well i like this and i must say that i have read it at least twenty times now and it is like reading me in many ways you are correct. It hearkens to my younger and much darker self when i was a living cocktail of disdain. Looking for punctuation marks to all of my careening scars all the while fabricating more in my aching haunt search. This fellow i do enjoy (as i do you) and should we meet we would more than likely beat the s**t out of us and then hug the familiar scars we would so recognize. We would at the very least bend the space time continuum... if not stop it all together for a moment of movement but that is all that we aspire to... she is as hard to find as last weeks exhale and surrounds us like the last two. This flow.. this rhyme.. in time, made me weep and laugh and want to strike something as i was stricken to its unfold. The familiar self evisceration to rebirth in words anew and renew yes i do like these fellows

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Woah, 20 times, you say?! I'm humbled and I'm sure if Silente had been here he and you would have co.. read more



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well i like this and i must say that i have read it at least twenty times now and it is like reading me in many ways you are correct. It hearkens to my younger and much darker self when i was a living cocktail of disdain. Looking for punctuation marks to all of my careening scars all the while fabricating more in my aching haunt search. This fellow i do enjoy (as i do you) and should we meet we would more than likely beat the s**t out of us and then hug the familiar scars we would so recognize. We would at the very least bend the space time continuum... if not stop it all together for a moment of movement but that is all that we aspire to... she is as hard to find as last weeks exhale and surrounds us like the last two. This flow.. this rhyme.. in time, made me weep and laugh and want to strike something as i was stricken to its unfold. The familiar self evisceration to rebirth in words anew and renew yes i do like these fellows

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Woah, 20 times, you say?! I'm humbled and I'm sure if Silente had been here he and you would have co.. read more
Have read three times with space between each reading.. and find it extremely hard to find the joins! That says as much as I can say about your and Silente's collaboration.

The content is more than emotional.. a void that's been filled with treasure for me.. courage, love, focus.. and so much more included.. all worthy. Wonderful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the effort you put in understanding this collab, Emma! Believe me, I stumble t.. read more
What a remarkable and rich themed, beautiful and layered to self culpability. This is Persian carpet complex.
It is to both your credit that the collaboation is seamless

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I think it's more to Silente's credit than mine but I'm glad we did this together.
Thank you .. read more
A beautiful piece, thank you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it 😊
Aloha, served up like hip hop on a Sunday, that feels straight off the cuff. This would be so good served up slam style. It's smart but slick. Just so damn cool to read. Kolohe good (badass). Congratulations you guys. Not that it matters, Yumna, I think this is my favorite collab of yours! Izzy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Island Hippy

3 Years Ago

Sorry island time internet, posted my comment 3 times.
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Nah, it's okay 😊
Great collaborative effort here. Congrats to you and Silente for weaving this awesome tapestry. Great rhythm, unique rhyme, imagery and wordage. "My nouns are thin and drowning in a sea of crowns"-wow! "Only you".... yes!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collaborative effort, Annette. Glad you like it 😊
"Sweet Prince of broken screams.
Only you..."
So much feel and emotions that go into it... I really appreciate all the efforts you guys used to write this piece, it must have taken quite a while, and the effect is that the readers really enjoy it and love the rhyming affect and theme even!!
Very well done Yumna and Silente :)
Keep it up!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Hm, well on my part, I worked on the collab with you and this one at the same time 😉😊 so it to.. read more
Mr.Writer

3 Years Ago

Oh lol :P
You guys are fast workers xD
No problem :)
Awesome job you guys!! I liked this, you can't even tell who wrote which (although I know :p) I liked the way this all flowed together and the seamless weaving of words!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

3 Years Ago

The second & last stanza, since you never start it off in collabs ;) haha. You're welcome!
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Oh lol yeah you know now haha 😛😛
I never could 😶😛
Kesha

3 Years Ago

Haha yes :)
You are truly growing by days, I liked how you create works in collabarations, not everyone can do that....
Am glad for you Yumna...
Keep sharing your thoughts....:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

True that 😊
ellemorell

3 Years Ago

Awesome, I love the richness of the rhyming. This would be really cool spoken
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collab 😊

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