Just be ~ you

Just be ~ you

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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An introspection. Experimental. Nothing really special...

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Let yourself loose ...
until - you cry out;

exhilarating ---


Breathe in ...
until - you feel your lungs;

collapsing ---


Love ...
until - your heart's capacity reaches its full;

annihilating ---


switch off your mind ... for a while ~


Sometimes it's better to forget everything and just be ~ you.


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
I hope it's not too vague :/

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I so like it, when few simple words have such great impact and affect in such a wonderful way, the beauty of simplicity, and the power of simplicity too! Well done my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Light. I appreciate your words here. Glad you like it :))
Light🌟

2 Years Ago

Oh, not vague even a bit, not to me :) a kind of meditation Your poem is.
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Ah, I'm glad it is. That is what I meant it to be for myself too...
This is really good. Sometimes we do need to let go and just be ourselves.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Yes, it does feel nice to do that...
Thank you for appreciating 😊
This was a beautiful, engaging and emotional poem Yumna with realisticness!
The way you write, it feels like so much is coming out of it!
I really liked this, and it isn't too vague at all, but pretty smooth :)
Well done, keep it up! :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Ah, I'm glad you think so. I still feel it's sorta incomplete...
Thank you for your words her.. read more
Mr.Writer

2 Years Ago

No problem Yumna! :)
This resembles meditation to me. Something I've been wanting to do again for a long time. Just be yourself. That's advise I could have used when I was young.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I was feeling frustrated when I wrote this so yes, it is very much the meditation I used to write of.. read more
Yeah, it's not vague...Indeed it's clear to me...and it worked well..sometimes it's truly better to be us...I enjoyed it...:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, so true. Thank you for your words, Surya. Glad you enjoyed 😊
Not vague! And wise advice in shallow and constantly changing world we live in. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'd say it's more constantly changing people than the world; for the world is made of people and not.. read more
All your experiments work out really well. ☺

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you think so 😊
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺
This was intense and powerful at the same time. Truly a moving ´piece even if its short. Message is very clear from the start till the very end. Great piece and great writing. Plus a great message we all need to keep dear.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad the message came off well. I appreciate your words here :)

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