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Collapsing

Collapsing

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Letting out my darker thoughts for once. Ramblings of a raging mind.

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I feign innocence, embracing the thought that I'm all knowing, the veils of my arrogance strung tight. The bloody hound within roars its disapproval, waiting to be unleashed, sneaking; searching for a way out. 

And there are nights when it does, nights, where it escapes its solitary confinement, spitting in rage.

Invisible cotton stares engulf me, traces of guilt wrap themselves around as the creature inside purrs... ravenous - another night to feed on to, another night to hold on to ... 


it has found its next prey, until the next time, while I break ~ collapsing ...


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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I can relate to this so much! I envy writers that can release the depth & power of raw unfiltered responses to people & life. Even if I try to do such a commentary, it comes out flippant rather than gut-wrenching. Here, you've touched on gut-wrenching, in a good way (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

When I first decided to start writing, I wanted to be a fiction/novel writer, but somehow came into .. read more



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I can relate to this so much! I envy writers that can release the depth & power of raw unfiltered responses to people & life. Even if I try to do such a commentary, it comes out flippant rather than gut-wrenching. Here, you've touched on gut-wrenching, in a good way (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

When I first decided to start writing, I wanted to be a fiction/novel writer, but somehow came into .. read more
we all have a lurking demon of one sort or another
I liked that this leaves us to ask ourselves...as well
nice

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'm glad it made you reflect. Thank you so much for appreciating, J :)
True art is created when artists shed their layered armor and make themselves vulnerable to the world, revealing themselves in a normal, yet often unflattering light, and still teach us something valuable about the world and ourselves. Thanks for sharing this piece with us. It shows your strength and humility.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I agree with your words. Thank you for reflecting and sharing your thoughts, Robert. Appreciated :)
Hello my friend. I liked this poem. Honest thoughts took reader to private thoughts and places.
"Invisible cotton stares engulf me, traces of guilt wrap themselves around as the creature inside purrs, ravenous; another night to feed on to, another night to hold on to ... "
I liked the above lines. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your words here and for liking 😊
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
oooooooooooooo subtle ravenous lover perhaps ... don't we all have our inner demons to contend with ...one can not avoid them if we are to truly live ..i like your little darkness poem ..intriguing ..especially coming from the good Doctor ;)))
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Hahaha even the good dr jekyll had a mr hyde hidden somewhere 😜
Thank you for your though.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i am Doc...having a great time! i don't have much but i am retired and this chapter is incomparable .. read more
For a short piece, this was - WOW shall we say. I really loved yor usage of words on this. The feelings I felt whilst my eyes read through it were - angry, dark, dangerous, lethal. I don't think I have ever seen you write on the dark side - maybe you should do it some more. This really was pretty damn powerful.

Mark.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

matrixmark

2 Years Ago

I live on the dark side of writing as you know, so to come across this piece was very VERY interesti.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Of course, I don't intend to stop writing until like forever :p
That really means a lot, tha.. read more
matrixmark

2 Years Ago

Good to hear that you will persue writing forever. You have a great talent, and people with talent. .. read more

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Ramblings of A Raging Mind


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