Palpable

Palpable

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Ramblings of a raging mind. Written with an angry/disappointed mindset. Not really thought over structure. To be edited later.

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we have thrown
the curtains, of uncertainties
now washed ashore.

Everything is new,
everything is palpable
in your eyes;

everything is not
how it seems

and I am dust
particles in air,
my breath, anesthetized.

I silently scream
my disapproval.

Everything crumbles,
we are mere ashes
in the distant storms.


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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When sadness and pain overtake us. No-place to go.
"Everything crumbles,
we are mere ashes
in the distant storms."
The above line, hard and so true. Thank you my friend for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Poet.
Your tumbling imagery delivers the idea of being tossed about in a vat of conflicting sensations. This could be the poster child for two people coming from completely different directions! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Just came by this review of yours...!
I like how you phrased that. It was/is exactly that wa.. read more
Such intense words, wondering 'if'.. Sometimes, you seem to echo my thoughts, don't know how.
'... and I am dust particles in the air.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Not sure if I should be glad that I echoed your thoughts here, Em, but thank you so much for reading.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Dear little friend, I always try to think over other people's words - tis all one has at times.. jus.. read more
Great! Curtains of Uncertainties. :")

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Ghania. :)
Ghania

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.
interesting how it is when one part of the couple thinks everything is just fine, being so unaware that the cracks are getting bigger, and the other is drifting away.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Interesting interpretation. Thank you for your words here, Jacob. Appreciated.
The words here reek of frustration... and the format made it even more compelling, it almost felt rebellious.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Travis. Glad it felt that way, which was the intention. ..

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Ramblings of A Raging Mind


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