Stripped naked ~ in love

Experimental scribbles. Inspired.

Stripped Naked ~ In Love 

I have loved you wordless;

silent, sometimes.

My eyes have spoken rain,

my heart has raged timeless.

I have wallowed

in sheer melancholy 

of wanting you, sometimes.

I have made excuses,

I have stripped myself naked 

to perfect strangers;

unveiled.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There are places deeper than words can express... wordless places... silent paths... and there seems to be a flavor of salted tears that mists this path of your soul. It seems a sea of emotions crests and crashes through you here... sorrow... anger... waves awakening the spirit... hoping... wishing... wanting... even in brokenness.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

There are indeed...thank you so much for your words here, Craig. Appreciated.

[andrew mitchell]

Captivating in imagery, tantalising in thought.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating, Andrew.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

You had me with the first line...I sat there motionless probably counting no breaths ...so I could reveal in the next lines....you call them scribbles and I call them masterpieces. Unveiled and willing to become.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you feel that way about this piece, Queenie. Appreciate your lovely words here x

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You've given this piece a sincere touch of intimate vulnerability. Great write.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Travis. Glad you appreciate.