Suffer || Life (10 words)

More spills of the mind. Release.

We're all weighed down 

by the cost of our sufferings.

Author's Note

Our sufferings are outweighed by the consequences of them.. I think.

Reviews

[Crowley]

the foundation of the Four Noble Truths I think from Buddhist thought process. Life is Suffering and I agree with you that the suffering pat is the part that disrupts, the consequences are actually a release of the suffering and sometimes don't pan out at all. I like these little snippets you write, good to get the brain turning in the morning. Thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you like these snippets, Crowley. Some would say they're too negative but oh well... Thanks so much for reading and your words here :)

[LazerRays]

Oooh, I like this one yumna :D
very good quote :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I had a feeling you would like this one ;) thanks so much for reading, Sarah.

[Lyn Anderson]

Nicely done. A quiet reflection

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here, Lyn. Always appreciated.

[Silt]

Since this is brief, I believe 'we are' vice 'we're' - would make it more poignant. Have you thought of reversing the order - showing the suffering first and then the results of said?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I did certainly think of reversing the order but couldn't come up with the right words for that (lacking on my part) but I will edit it eventually.
I agree in what you say re replacing 'we're' with 'we are' but that would out the whole point of the 10 word write.
Thank you so much for your critique here and for readimg. Appreciated.

[Silt]

Terrible of me to quote Hemingway incorrectly.
"For sale - baby shoes - never worn" I believe it is. Like you, with yours, few words to convey many unseen.

[Chris Shaw]

When less really counts for more. Well done.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating, Christine.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Aren't these tiny thoughts the Largest triumphs? I just love these!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, yet again. Appreciated a lot.