Suffer || Life (10 words)

Suffer || Life (10 words)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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More spills of the mind. Release.

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We're all weighed down 
by the cost of our sufferings.







© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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Dr. YumnaKay
Our sufferings are outweighed by the consequences of them.. I think.

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the foundation of the Four Noble Truths I think from Buddhist thought process. Life is Suffering and I agree with you that the suffering pat is the part that disrupts, the consequences are actually a release of the suffering and sometimes don't pan out at all. I like these little snippets you write, good to get the brain turning in the morning. Thank you!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you like these snippets, Crowley. Some would say they're too negative but oh well... Thanks.. read more



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Oooh, I like this one yumna :D
very good quote :)

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I had a feeling you would like this one ;) thanks so much for reading, Sarah.
the foundation of the Four Noble Truths I think from Buddhist thought process. Life is Suffering and I agree with you that the suffering pat is the part that disrupts, the consequences are actually a release of the suffering and sometimes don't pan out at all. I like these little snippets you write, good to get the brain turning in the morning. Thank you!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you like these snippets, Crowley. Some would say they're too negative but oh well... Thanks.. read more
Nicely done. A quiet reflection

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your words here, Lyn. Always appreciated.
Since this is brief, I believe 'we are' vice 'we're' - would make it more poignant. Have you thought of reversing the order - showing the suffering first and then the results of said?



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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I did certainly think of reversing the order but couldn't come up with the right words for that (lac.. read more
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Silt

1 Year Ago

Terrible of me to quote Hemingway incorrectly.
"For sale - baby shoes - never worn" I belie.. read more
When less really counts for more. Well done.

Chris

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating, Christine.
Aren't these tiny thoughts the Largest triumphs? I just love these!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, yet again. Appreciated a lot.

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