Wrackspurt (Limerick)

Wrackspurt (Limerick)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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My first limerick officially. I'm almost back from my hiatus and my negative phase. Just trying something different. Probably silly but lol ;P

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A beautiful mermaid went fishing once
​but was made a bait by a stupid dunce,
bravely not minding her fins,
she hit him right in his shins
and so that wrackspurt met his comeuppance!


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
A limerick is a form of verse, often humorous and sometimes obscene, in five-line, predominantly anapestic meter with a strict rhyme scheme of AABBA, in which the first, second and fifth line rhyme, while the third and fourth lines are shorter and share a different rhyme.

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i love limericks ...some can argue they originated in Ireland ;) great expressions of bawdy rascalism .. ; 0
nice to lighten up now and again isn't it Doc! glad you had a good rest but even more so you are back ..
E.
ps. thank you fro one great new word for me "wrackspurt" fantastic .. putting it in the back of me noodle to use at some vague point in the future .. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, I'm aware of the origin. Interestingly enough, I was introduced to limericks by an Irish friend.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

absolutely my friend! :)



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Nice limerick it's hearty to read

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating. :)
Benson Osuji

2 Years Ago

Could love to write limericks like you review my work and see what you think
A very nice ending to the poetry. I did like this one my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, John. Glad you like it. :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
I love limericks, too . . . rarely see them these days & yours fits the bill, delivering a sassy kick in the punchline, more important (to me) than technicalities of form *wink! wink!* Your imagination is splashing in this one (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Tbh, in all the time that I've started writing, I've almost been afraid of trying to write a limeric.. read more
Very clever and cute. I like it

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Ah, I'm glad you like it, Lyn. I actually enjoyed writing this one :D Thank you so much.
Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome. BTW I am actually blown away by the amazing development of your writing. It's .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

That makes me smile. I had some really great teachers to teach me to write in WC, including you, so .. read more
i love limericks ...some can argue they originated in Ireland ;) great expressions of bawdy rascalism .. ; 0
nice to lighten up now and again isn't it Doc! glad you had a good rest but even more so you are back ..
E.
ps. thank you fro one great new word for me "wrackspurt" fantastic .. putting it in the back of me noodle to use at some vague point in the future .. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, I'm aware of the origin. Interestingly enough, I was introduced to limericks by an Irish friend.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

absolutely my friend! :)
Enjoyed this one. Perfect. 😀

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Najam. Glad you enjoyed. :)
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Indeed he did, keep on writing! Lol

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:D lol thanks, Andrew, for reading this silly piece. I'm trying my hand in humorous poetry for once .. read more

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