Soap Bubble (Limerick)

Soap Bubble (Limerick)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Another fun write. Bad luck strikes - I had one helluva fit of sneezing for hours after I finished writing this one and showed it to my sister. She said 'serves you right!' :p

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As I sat down on my soap bubble
lecturing my sis on her trouble
she fell into a doze
I sneezed under her nose
and then started to laugh, bent double. 
 


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What a change of direction for you, Yumna. Such wit! Seems you've discovered a smile a minute is worth its weight of tears in a bucket with a large hole!

Tis great to see you back, you've been missed. But, do remember to reflect your feelings, dear friend.. whenever..

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, so I discovered. It doesn't do good to dwell in negativity so I decided to bring out my lighter.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

Whatever brightens your day is what really matters,
dear Yumna.



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When a sis focusing on lecturing her sister something unexpected happens! ask me about it ;)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, aye. Always like this lol I have 3 sisters! 😶😛 Thank you for reading :))
lightsong

2 Years Ago

hhhaa I have only one, with three well.... it would be really something! ;)

may You a.. read more
Hilarious, really enjoyed your limerick. Thanks for sharing

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed. :)
I'll leave the question as to whether this limerick is within the rules or not to experts. This, I think. Is a very charming picture

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Ah, I know, the syllable count isn't correct in this 😶 I'm still struggling with that but not giv.. read more
Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

I don't count syllables. I just read them aloud. :) shhh don't tell Richard
What a change of direction for you, Yumna. Such wit! Seems you've discovered a smile a minute is worth its weight of tears in a bucket with a large hole!

Tis great to see you back, you've been missed. But, do remember to reflect your feelings, dear friend.. whenever..

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, so I discovered. It doesn't do good to dwell in negativity so I decided to bring out my lighter.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

Whatever brightens your day is what really matters,
dear Yumna.
lol...I love to see this clever and light side of you. This was amazing and funny. Loved it!!!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:D I'll admit, I like this side of me too! Thank you so much for appreciating, Crowley 😊
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Gee
I think you could lose the " but" at the start of line 3.
Enjoyed the read

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Gee

2 Years Ago

I very syllable count when rhyming as if it reads right then in my mind it is.
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

yes, I think you're right here.
Gee

2 Years Ago

I very rarely.....oops
I'm very much enjoying the view as your limerick obsession develops *smile* (keep going!) I love limericks and you take this poetic form to new places with your fresh approach, which is always fun to see! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Obsession is the word alright! :D I just thought I've been to much into serious and sappy writing an.. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

I know what you mean -- after I write a serious piece, I crave a bit of silly rhyming obsession! *sm.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Ah, and I'll be honest with you, whenever I read your rhyming pieces (there are loads of 'em!) I alw.. read more

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