Colonel Blimp (Limerick)

Another attempt at humour. :P

Colonel Blimp once went on a trot,

on the way, his nose filled with snot, 
his face went so blue 
out came his brain screw

and eight was the time on the dot. 

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Spot-on rhythm, counts, and flow, Yumna, and your syntax is rollicking when imagination takes over … how can it not when reading such a ridiculously hilarious scenario?
Ha-hahhh! That picture is perrrfect to set the scene!

Really good stuff, Lady-Poet … great entertainment, and I'm still giggling! ⁓ Richard 🤪

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D happy to have given you a reason to giggle! Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Richard 😊

[Wanda Vergara-Yates]

I see a lot of 8s here. Guess that will teach him to go a-snotting while a-trotting, now he can't say anything new.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha oh so funny ...nice one Doc. ..a fine limerick for sure ...and perfect pic to go with!
E.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D thank you, Einstein! Glad you like it 😊😇

[alanwgraham]

or
Colonel Blimp once set off for a trot
the poor fellow was feeling quite fraught
with the cold, quite a dose
so he blew hard his nose
and the party got covered in snot

Limericks are my favourite fun poems and you've got a great collection here.
Regards,
Alan

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your limerick here made me laugh :D Thank you so much for appreciating my silly writes 😊