A Lost Fight (Limerick)

A Lost Fight (Limerick)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

How I wished this happened. Lol

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I once met a man in the gym,

his hair had a right funny trim.

He dared me to fight,

thought I'd run in fright,

'til I grabbed him by his long limb!



© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Rest is up to reader's imagination ;)

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This, to me, is one of your best limericks that I've read becuz of the way it flows from start to finish, reads like a story, no bumps, very smoothly conceived. The ending seems like it could have a double entendre for those with a dirty mind, but it also conjures up a variety of possibilities for: "long limb"(s) *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'll give credits to Richard for the smoothness in this one :) and ah, why didn't I see that possibi.. read more



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Ouch, especially if the wrong one was grabbed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I'm wondering just what you meant by his long limb! Nevertheless painful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I did mean limb in the literal sense but it's nice and interesting to know the reader's imagination .. read more
This, to me, is one of your best limericks that I've read becuz of the way it flows from start to finish, reads like a story, no bumps, very smoothly conceived. The ending seems like it could have a double entendre for those with a dirty mind, but it also conjures up a variety of possibilities for: "long limb"(s) *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'll give credits to Richard for the smoothness in this one :) and ah, why didn't I see that possibi.. read more
Like it!


Stupid machine I've said what I want to say > is that 25 characters

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Hahah sometimes I find that 25 character thing irritating too!
Thank you for liking this one.. read more
Wild Rose

2 Years Ago

Some times that is all I can think off to say

I have added tour book to my library
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

That's very kind of you, thanks again :)
That is too funny! If your talking about a good tug on the nose, Dont you think that to be a bit risky though? there is a good chance of contact with a lingering snot or worse a big wet bugger !!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

haha the closest I've come to fighting with men/guys has been arm wrestling (I usually always won lo.. read more
Should men be scared of you? Haha. Like the cartoon too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Hahah I'm told that I'm quite intimidating lool
Thank you! Glad you like it :))

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