Pearls (Shape Poem)

A learning experiment. Edited slightly.

PEARLS

 A 

dew

 drop 

 in the 

morning 

and pearls 

 in her eyes, at 

the same time ,

glistened smooth as 

pearly white shadows 

emerged, over-shadowing 

everything. A faint half smile 

crossed the sun's ever - young 

face as an arc of magenta shades 

enveloped her very essence;   the 

tears that followed, soon washed 

away every doubt that she had  

harboured in her stoned, 

marble heart

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Another adventure
in a brand new form,
to spread your wings
much higher than norm.

Sheer eye-candy, so beautifully built and presented, dear poetess … this is the epitome of elegance in visual and emotional poetic bliss.
Deeply imaginative and heart touching, your poetic imagery and Concrete image compliment each the other with equal grace, and that picture … OMG, it's scrumptiously gorgeous to the mind's-eye, setting a perfect ambience for your moment.

What a pleasure it is, YumnaKay, to enjoy your every new effort … KUDOS! ⁓ Richard : )

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic forms hahah
Thank you so much, Richard! I'm humbled by your appreciation. 🌺🍃💜

[Vivian Gospel]

I should try this form sometime.

[Jon Roggie]

Do you realize how lazy I try to be?
Now you had to add a beautiful poem in the shape of a dew drop.
I despair when I consider my own creativity.
Now, after the complaints,
lovely poem!

Jon

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D hahah let's be lazy together lol I promise not to try writing in this form again ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating, Jon. Glad you like it :))

[Jon Roggie]

Try a ramble. A touch of silly can be an eye opener!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear friend. I liked the design and the words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating, John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This is a vision in artistic form. I have read it several times just to soak in all the alluring features from the way the eye rolls down like a drop the fantasm in color contrast... to the meaning of the word and thoughts inside my soul. Your experiment is a great success!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your words leave me humbled, Queenie. Thank you so much for appreciating x

[Neville]

This is stupendous.. it reads like a tear drop.. perfect in shape, rhyme and form...... Neville x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Uh uh, I didn't even realize until now that it sorts of rhymes! That limerick writing has rubbed off on me lool
thank you so much for your lovely words here, Neville. Glad you like it x

[Neville]

You bet I did.. thank you..Neville

[Crowley]

How cool is that whole thing. I love the shape of the drop and the change in font colors. and the writing is a little piece of perfection. Great job Doc!!!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I did have a fair few tries on it before I git the shape right but I'm glad it seems to have turned out okay being that this was my first attempt at writing concrete poetry ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating and your lovely words, Crowley! 😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

*got
Lol 😛