Pearls (Shape Poem)

Pearls (Shape Poem)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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A learning experiment. Edited slightly.

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PEARLS
 A 
dew
 drop 
 ithe 
morning 
and pearls 
 in her eyes, at 
the same time ,
glistened smooth as 
pearly white shadows 
emerged, over-shadowing 
everything. A faint half smile 
crossed the sun's ever - young 
face as an arc of magentshades 
enveloped her very essence;   the 
tears that followed, soon washed 
away every doubt that she had  
harboured in her stoned, 
marble heart


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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Another adventure
in a brand new form,
to spread your wings
much higher than norm.

Sheer eye-candy, so beautifully built and presented, dear poetess … this is the epitome of elegance in visual and emotional poetic bliss.
Deeply imaginative and heart touching, your poetic imagery and Concrete image compliment each the other with equal grace, and that picture … OMG, it's scrumptiously gorgeous to the mind's-eye, setting a perfect ambience for your moment.

What a pleasure it is, YumnaKay, to enjoy your every new effort … KUDOS! ⁓ Richard : )

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic form.. read more
Vivian Gospel

1 Year Ago

I should try this form sometime.



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Do you realize how lazy I try to be?
Now you had to add a beautiful poem in the shape of a dew drop.
I despair when I consider my own creativity.
Now, after the complaints,
lovely poem!

Jon

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

:D hahah let's be lazy together lol I promise not to try writing in this form again ;)
Thank .. read more
Jon Roggie

1 Year Ago

Try a ramble. A touch of silly can be an eye opener!
A wonderful poem shared dear friend. I liked the design and the words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating, John :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
This is a vision in artistic form. I have read it several times just to soak in all the alluring features from the way the eye rolls down like a drop the fantasm in color contrast... to the meaning of the word and thoughts inside my soul. Your experiment is a great success!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Your words leave me humbled, Queenie. Thank you so much for appreciating x
This is stupendous.. it reads like a tear drop.. perfect in shape, rhyme and form...... Neville x

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Uh uh, I didn't even realize until now that it sorts of rhymes! That limerick writing has rubbed off.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago

You bet I did.. thank you..Neville
Another adventure
in a brand new form,
to spread your wings
much higher than norm.

Sheer eye-candy, so beautifully built and presented, dear poetess … this is the epitome of elegance in visual and emotional poetic bliss.
Deeply imaginative and heart touching, your poetic imagery and Concrete image compliment each the other with equal grace, and that picture … OMG, it's scrumptiously gorgeous to the mind's-eye, setting a perfect ambience for your moment.

What a pleasure it is, YumnaKay, to enjoy your every new effort … KUDOS! ⁓ Richard : )

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic form.. read more
Vivian Gospel

1 Year Ago

I should try this form sometime.
How cool is that whole thing. I love the shape of the drop and the change in font colors. and the writing is a little piece of perfection. Great job Doc!!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I did have a fair few tries on it before I git the shape right but I'm glad it seems to have turned .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

*got
Lol 😛

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