Word Cage (Limerick)

Word Cage (Limerick)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Is there such a thing as a serious limerick? This might be one.

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There once lived a man in sydney called Jay,
who scribbled poetry from June till May.
He designed a pretty stage,
to trap birds in his word cage,
'til one drowned his poems and made him pay!


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Just my take on some men thinking they're too clever to get away with online flings. Nothing personal though lool

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Kinda funny though. In a dark humor sort of way. Considering I once wrote a similarly dark/serious humorous limerick for school and got an A on it, I'm pretty sure its alright XD besides, everything is a remix these days anyway. All that matters is the structure (awesome) and the message (received) anyway, so you did well either way! :D

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I wasn't into poetry writing at school but wish I had been 😶
It's dark alright, I didn't .. read more



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Made me laugh.... seriously.... Neville

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

hah I'd rather you laugh seriously than not at all ;) thanks for reading this one, my friend x
Neville

2 Years Ago

My very sincere pleasure & true... N
Kinda funny though. In a dark humor sort of way. Considering I once wrote a similarly dark/serious humorous limerick for school and got an A on it, I'm pretty sure its alright XD besides, everything is a remix these days anyway. All that matters is the structure (awesome) and the message (received) anyway, so you did well either way! :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I wasn't into poetry writing at school but wish I had been 😶
It's dark alright, I didn't .. read more
I thought of you yesterday. I came across a whole book of limericks in a second hand shop. Many by Edward Lear. I enjoyed this one, particularly the author's note (lol). Thank you Dr Y.

Chris

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I would love to get my hands on one!
:D thank you so much for appreciating this one too, Chr.. read more
Cool limerick. I should try some myself.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivian Gospel

2 Years Ago

Don' hold your hopes to high.
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Don't underestimate yourself this much. :)
Vivian Gospel

2 Years Ago

If you say so.

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