Dizzy Lizzy (Limerick)

Dizzy Lizzy (Limerick)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Another limerick. Dedicated. Lol

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There once lived a girl named Lizzy, 
who was more oft tired than busy.
Lost in her daydreams, 
she used to then scream ...
doing homework made her dizzy...!


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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Aha! I spy an anime pictureeeeee! :D
hahaha!

This Poem made me smile yumna XD
it's hilarious and definetly applies to Americans with ADHD :D
this was really fun to read- :P

(I've never been good at reviews anyways so I apologize- I am not a reviewer person. This is me trying)

-Sarah



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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Haha I'm glad you like this one. It was definitely written for an American. ;) lol
I like th.. read more


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I resemble that limerick all the time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The bell of my school memories have been rung again by this limerick!
But still I feel I'll be wrapping up my homework tomorrow...cause some are never gonna finished....I like this girl's glittery eyes here...and the way she has tucked her lips then screamed out...tomorrow!😄
Thanks for sharing this Yumna :)

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Tahsin (Taah-scene)

2 Years Ago

Sometimes....am too lazy😴
You're very welcome!☺
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:P I was even lazier when I reached uni. haha
Tahsin (Taah-scene)

2 Years Ago

Same pinchu!😃
What a day for a daydream ..oops there I go. I'm guilty. Very nice little limerick and I very much appreciated your posted image. Thank you Dr Y. All good wishes to you.

Chris

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Daydreaming ain't half bad. I'm guilty of that too ;) Thank you so much for reading and appreciating.. read more
I still find it hard to equate your limericks with the intense poetry of a lifetime away, SP! Methinks your sense of humour is absorbing Autumnal colours and your words becoming just a little adventurous. Wondering about the metre count in this limerick.. but love the grin it's brought me. Must go, visitors drawing up as I put full stop! Hugs.

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I try to figure out which one feels closer to me, but of course I do feel better and more confident .. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

Tis said that to laugh and love makes life worth living. You and others provide the first: nowt sai.. read more
Cute poem. That made me smile and lol.

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Dawn. Glad it made you smile :))
Cute one Yumna... :)
Made me smile....
Feel like that everyday heheh now it's work...not home work...:p ( oh ya home work also :/ )

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

True. I guess we females never get rid of that 'home work' :/ :P I'm glad it made you smile, Ardra. .. read more
Know this feeling well - especially doing my 'tax returns' - loved it - great little ditty :-)

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:D haha I can imagine how that feels like :x
Thank you so much for liking, Phill :))
Sounds like my siblings 😁
Just showed the image to my sister saying, 'This is you' she laughed.
Enjoyed reading this one. Especially the image😄

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

haha yeah lol kids these days :P I'm glad you enjoyed reading this one, Najam. Thank you so much :)
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome. 😄
Glad to see you dipping your pen back into the limerick bottle again! *wink! wink!* To me, line 2 seems to have a bit of an awkward sound, as far as the English construction of it. It seems like it needs the word "more" (tired than busy). For example: "who was oft more tired than busy" . . . or some other possible tweak. To me this sounds like a "dog ate my homework" excuse, except nowadays I guess kids are more into using their neuroses as excuses (we didn't know about neuroses, back when I had homework, so we had to blame the dog) *smile* Fondly, Margie

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Ah yes, I've been thinking of tweaking that line and I do like your suggestion.
hah that dog.. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

I was a nerd that did extra homework for fun . . .
I used to daydream all the time, tis a mental defense mechanism ya know and I distinctly recall that feeling too... nice one.. Neville

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, aye. Sometimes the best escape. Thank you so much for liking this one, Neville :)
Neville

2 Years Ago

you are most deserving and welcome my friend... Neville

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