Between Neverminds & Nothings ...

Sunday night scribbles. Spontaneous write.

Somewhere between your

timid neverminds and

my haughty nothings,

 

love found its way,

peeking shyly with just

a touch of awkwardness

that bursts forth at

times but not before

rendering us dumb,

if just for a moment ...

Reviews

[LazerRays]

There's nothing like an awkward romance, eh? It's completely dorky but there's just something beautiful about it. It's the most wonderful type of love, truly afraid to lose the other person. Haha- hopefully those two in the poem stay together forever, as it seems they love each other to death; awkwardness and all.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

::P Thank you so much for your words here, Sarah. Always appreciated. x

[LazerRays]

;) ya welcommmmmmeeeee

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes it happens just that way. Love the title.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It sure does..thank you so much, Lyn. Glad you appreciate :)

[Jon Roggie]

I can see the expressions on the faces.
So many pairs have said these words.

Nice one Doc!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

So they have...thank you so much for appreciating, Jon. :-)

[angel]

Oh, I love this!
Some folks, they say, are 'made for each other, and yep, it seems it's true...

I didn''t see much wrong, just a few missing commas

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, the missing commas were actually intentional...thank you so much for liking, angel :-))

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry dear Poet.
"love found its way,
peeking shyly with just
a touch of awkwardness"
The above lines. True and sweet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating. Glad you like it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did liked dear friend and you are welcome.

[Neville]

this is an absolutely amazing bit of poetry.. wish I had written it myself..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That is very humbling to know..thank you so much for appreciating, my friend :-))

[Neville]

my sincere pleasure.. :)

[john l smith]

Yes, building a relationship can sometimes be awkward but the right one, grows into warmth and trust

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree..thank you so much for reading and your words here :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Aw, this is lovely. It sort of brings a warm glow. I can remember those silences, that awkwardness which comes with those first stages of love. Nicely expressed Dr Y.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

From what I've known so far, that awkwardness does hang around heavily and those silences as well, though not really uncomfortable but rather penetrating ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating, Christine. :))

[Chris Shaw]

I used to blush as well in those silences which made the whole thing far more colourful:))

[Ardra]

That sounds like a sweet love story.... :)
Mmmm Sometimes love tip toes into our heart and we are left speechless :))
Love this cute one you have created....

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Some love stories are definitely sweet ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating, Ardra. Your words made me smile :))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and it is the perfect kind of dumb...dumbfounded that we did not notice all along what was right in front of us.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, so true...thank you so much for your words here, Jacob. Always appreciated :)