Between Neverminds & Nothings ...

Between Neverminds & Nothings ...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Sunday night scribbles. Spontaneous write.

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Somewhere between your
timid neverminds and
my haughty nothings,
 
love found its way,
peeking shyly with just
a touch of awkwardness

that bursts forth at
times but not before
rendering us dumb,

if just for a moment ...


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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There's nothing like an awkward romance, eh? It's completely dorky but there's just something beautiful about it. It's the most wonderful type of love, truly afraid to lose the other person. Haha- hopefully those two in the poem stay together forever, as it seems they love each other to death; awkwardness and all.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

::P Thank you so much for your words here, Sarah. Always appreciated. x
Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

;) ya welcommmmmmeeeee



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Sometimes it happens just that way. Love the title.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

It sure does..thank you so much, Lyn. Glad you appreciate :)
I can see the expressions on the faces.
So many pairs have said these words.

Nice one Doc!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

So they have...thank you so much for appreciating, Jon. :-)
Oh, I love this!
Some folks, they say, are 'made for each other, and yep, it seems it's true...

I didn''t see much wrong, just a few missing commas

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh, the missing commas were actually intentional...thank you so much for liking, angel :-))
There's nothing like an awkward romance, eh? It's completely dorky but there's just something beautiful about it. It's the most wonderful type of love, truly afraid to lose the other person. Haha- hopefully those two in the poem stay together forever, as it seems they love each other to death; awkwardness and all.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

::P Thank you so much for your words here, Sarah. Always appreciated. x
Sarah_Allen

1 Year Ago

;) ya welcommmmmmeeeee
This is poetry dear Poet.
"love found its way,
peeking shyly with just
a touch of awkwardness"
The above lines. True and sweet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating. Glad you like it :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I did liked dear friend and you are welcome.
this is an absolutely amazing bit of poetry.. wish I had written it myself..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That is very humbling to know..thank you so much for appreciating, my friend :-))
Neville

1 Year Ago

my sincere pleasure.. :)
Yes, building a relationship can sometimes be awkward but the right one, grows into warmth and trust

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I agree..thank you so much for reading and your words here :-)
Aw, this is lovely. It sort of brings a warm glow. I can remember those silences, that awkwardness which comes with those first stages of love. Nicely expressed Dr Y.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

From what I've known so far, that awkwardness does hang around heavily and those silences as well, t.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Year Ago

I used to blush as well in those silences which made the whole thing far more colourful:))
That sounds like a sweet love story.... :)
Mmmm Sometimes love tip toes into our heart and we are left speechless :))
Love this cute one you have created....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Some love stories are definitely sweet ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating, Ardra. Your wor.. read more
and it is the perfect kind of dumb...dumbfounded that we did not notice all along what was right in front of us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Aye, so true...thank you so much for your words here, Jacob. Always appreciated :)

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