Daydreams

Daydreams

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Scribbles. Inspired.

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My fingers travel

of their own accord,

 

tracing the moon-white

of your eyes.



© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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I might be lazy in reviewing You but I always try to read what You post, Your talent never fail to shine brightly, and this little gem here is an example, I love the photo, I love the font, the colour, the thought from Your always creative mind. freedom in love and how to love I feel through Your words, along tenderness and sensual yearnings, well done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Ah, dear Light, if anyone's been lazy in reviewing then that's surely me, for I often find myself sh.. read more
Light

10 Months Ago

I totally understand You! sometimes I say what I will say to this poem or that one?! it's not nice t.. read more



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So not just the sensual but the "white of the eyes" that travel into the mind, leaving the fingers to write..so simple as that first droplet of rain ....a storm was to follow and all of it in the moon-white of the those eyes..LOVE the photo you placed alongside of this as well! Beautiful piece ...Thank you for sharing it.


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, my friend. Glad you appreciate :))
Perdition

10 Months Ago

My pleasure~
I might be lazy in reviewing You but I always try to read what You post, Your talent never fail to shine brightly, and this little gem here is an example, I love the photo, I love the font, the colour, the thought from Your always creative mind. freedom in love and how to love I feel through Your words, along tenderness and sensual yearnings, well done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Ah, dear Light, if anyone's been lazy in reviewing then that's surely me, for I often find myself sh.. read more
Light

10 Months Ago

I totally understand You! sometimes I say what I will say to this poem or that one?! it's not nice t.. read more
I LOVE this, beautifully done without too many words.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Glad you appreciate :-)
........................... le petit poème parfait :) N

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Merci beaucoup :))))
Neville

10 Months Ago

mon plaisir :)
Brevity at its best. A sensual and loving write. Well done Dr Y.

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Christine. Glad you appreciate :-)
very romantic and sensual ... "...the moon-white of your eyes" :)
E.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

:D thank you so much for appreciating, Einstein! Sometimes I like taking out that side ;)
Intense, meaningful words.. a poet's intention and emotion truly come to life.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, Em. Always appreciated. xx
Wonderful use of words dear Poet. I believed every word. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one, my friend :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

I did and you are welcome dear Poet.

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