Envious

Envious

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Romantic. Inspired.

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I am envious of each ray 

of the sun that dares

 

to kiss 

your earlobes


and passes through the 

gaps of your hair.



© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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I really find inspiring your compilation of romantic poetry.
It is such a breath of fresh air, the shortness and sweetness!

Well done!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one too, my friend. Glad you were inspired :))
Achingly beautiful. Whether in the sun or the eyes of another, there is something so painful about seeing the one you adore being made warm by light other than your own. So much is said here in these six bittersweet lines.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, dear Craig. Always appreciated. x
An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

And so glad your words are flowing into the New Year. :)
Very nice. All of at some are envious of others whether it's because they have more money or beauty than us. I easily get envious too actually.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your words here and for liking :)
JungLee

2 Years Ago

You're welocme c:
Such love for one is a gift true- to be shared by two- wonderful use of words to express emotion and beauty🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, so it is. Thank you so much for liking :)
and here I am looking at my attention that passed through the words of the imagery and brought me a broad smile. Loved it :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Glad it made you smile. Thank you so much for liking, m-d. :)))
super aint good enuf.. this is gonna bald em all over.. oh' and regards to them earlobes :) Happy New Year too x

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:D hahah I'll take your word for it ;P thank you so much for appreciating, N. Happy New Year to you .. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago

.........:) x
Less is more... and your few words capture a moment and speak of desire and loveliness. Lovely imagery - the sun kissing those earlobes, passing through the 'gaps of your hair'. Dreamy, delicious.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating, Jibey. Glad you like it :))

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