Gratitude II

Gratitude II

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Inspired. Dedicated.

"
And I'm certain 
that there are things 
that I'll always be uncertain 
of...the need to let you go; 
the surge to feel your 
voice wash over me...

and I'm certain 
that there are things 
that I'll never get tired of. 
To gaze at the moon late 
at night; of the [soothing] 
effect I experience while 
reading your words

...and of my mind, 
which thinks up ways 
on how to irk you, 
little by little...


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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What I enjoy most about this poem is your little playful streak that pops up at the end! I always love & relate to your serious pronouncements about love & life, but it's great seeing you have fun with a poem like this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

:D I like keeping a diverse style in terms of topics, and serious becomes too depressing after a whi.. read more
And I'm certain this was a lovely read ;) you can really feel your emotions pour from your musings. Nicely done

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Ah, I missed this review! Thank you so much for your lovely words here, Kesha. Hope you've been well.. read more
To be tempted by words. The moon lit night become more acceptable. I enjoyed the poetry. Like a secret whisper, the words. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

So they are, indeed...thanks so much for your reading, John. Appreciated.
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and You are so right dear Yumna, and how beautifully enchantingly You've expressed it with Your own style, from Your own mind, teasing, alluring and filled with warm yearnings... very very beautifully lovely my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, dear Light. I'm glad you appreciate :)))
I suppose the adage 'no news is good news' applies. But I don't find it comfortable.

Gazing at the moon...irksome...your mind

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

It def is, at times.
Thanks so much for reading and your words, Jibey.

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