Second Best

Second Best

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Ramblings. I think I was a little angry when I wrote this :x

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Tired of being taken 
second best, 
she tweaked first 
just a little bit,
and came up with 
a mighty fist...!



© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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ahahaha sounds like a short chopping upper cut to me...delivered while on the inside ;) i love the fights ... but i think i would stay away from this one ..i especially like the intrigue as she tweaks first ... and i am left with the sense that there is a whole lot more to this story, Doc! i like it ... glad i didn't miss it
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh, I meant tweaking 'first' - the word ;) dk if it came across as that but your review made me smil.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yeah ... i read "first" ... ;) your poem points out a grave dnager in all of social media land ...wa.. read more



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and just when he thought he was going to win by decision!
packs a lethal punch..(pun certainly intended)
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ayee, right when they're thinking of winning, there comes the punch! :P lol thanks so much for readi.. read more
This has got attitude Dr Y. A bit of tweaking before an upper cut. Too right, what woman wants to be second best.. Top of the pops or nothing I say. You've got me smiling.

Chris


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Def not me, it's an awful feeling :/
Glad it made you smile, Christine. Thank you so much for.. read more
ahahaha sounds like a short chopping upper cut to me...delivered while on the inside ;) i love the fights ... but i think i would stay away from this one ..i especially like the intrigue as she tweaks first ... and i am left with the sense that there is a whole lot more to this story, Doc! i like it ... glad i didn't miss it
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh, I meant tweaking 'first' - the word ;) dk if it came across as that but your review made me smil.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yeah ... i read "first" ... ;) your poem points out a grave dnager in all of social media land ...wa.. read more

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Added on February 21, 2019
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Ramblings of A Raging Mind


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