Dreary Mornings

Dreary Mornings

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Ramblings. Unedited.

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Midnight swallowed 

overweening pride, unbidden, 

in all its hollowness,


as worthlessness dug up 

a permanent hole 

around the edges of 

dreary mornings.



© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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I love the first verse especially. Restless midnights always bring out the prideful s**t that's swirling in the back of one's evil mind, when we're not awake enuf to filter out our own ugliness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Well, I won't deny that I'm quite egoistic and prideful at times, but there are moments when it just.. read more
' .. as worthlessness dug up a permanent - hole around the edges - of dreary mornings.'

Those words say far, far more than their letters, Yumna. They near give brilliance to the moods of those mornings.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your words here, Emma. Been having rough days lately so haven't been around mu.. read more
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

So sorry to read that, Yumna. Sometimes writing helps with problems, other times, tis only time tha.. read more
yumnaaa!! omg i've missed your writing so much!! lovely piece btww :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Shaan! Good to see you back around here! How've you been? :D thanks so much for reading this one and.. read more
Well this is all the wretched... But YUM.... you should take pride in these lines dear heart and fill those chasms of calamity with a few spoonfuls of that that and take to loves and call them in the morning. This is doctor bunny's prescription :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Ah I wish I could say your prescription worked but sometimes it doesn't work that way, sadly...
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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

10 Months Ago

oh dear I am so sorry
A deeply sad piece as the protagonist has sleepless nights and still faces the morning feeling worthless. A short piece with impacr and such pathos.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

That feeling just keeps persisting...
Thank you so much for reading and your words here, John.. read more

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