Altered Truths

Altered Truths

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Evening scribbles.

"

I drank your lies

with a smile on my lips.


One of us

must be dreaming ...



© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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Good job, Doc. Yes, we can be accepting of another's deceit, either unwittingly or willingly, rather than be alone. But then, we come to understand that it is no good for either party and things must change. But which one is dreaming...the one who thinks his story has gone over...or the one who has realized her world needs to change.

A good write, Doc.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

And sometimes, both are being deceived by the other, I think. Never easy if it's one sided though..... read more



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Good job, Doc. Yes, we can be accepting of another's deceit, either unwittingly or willingly, rather than be alone. But then, we come to understand that it is no good for either party and things must change. But which one is dreaming...the one who thinks his story has gone over...or the one who has realized her world needs to change.

A good write, Doc.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

And sometimes, both are being deceived by the other, I think. Never easy if it's one sided though..... read more
I like this little poem.. I like it a lot...

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Glad you appreciate, Neville. Thank you so much for reading :))
Neville

5 Months Ago

my pleasure
Very cutting Yumna, and I'm sorry for your pain don't be to hard on yourself we have all (including myself) seen beauty in things that turned out to be ugly

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Ah it wasn't really written as a personal experience but thank you so much for your words here, BB. .. read more
such a conundrum presented...either he is dreaming that she is really accepting his lies as truth...
or she is drinking in his lies, believing them..and being deceived.
i like how this can be taken opposite ways.
well done.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

I'm glad you appreciate, Jacob. Thank you so much for your thoughts here :)
Sounds quite scary as the protagonist appears completely in control and making a conscious decision to play a double game. Short and powerful piece.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating and your words here, John :)

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