Lunar || Remnants

Lunar || Remnants

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Late night scribbles.

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Tonight
the moon exhaled
a sigh of relief.

How unbearable it had been,
gazing down at the Earth,
and what now remains of it...


© 2020 Dr. YumnaKay


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this is a wonderfully stirring piece,
vividly unique. mirrors reality in a refreshing, yet aching way. your words, leaves indelible imprints

thank you for sharing ~ x

...i’d favorite’d but once again, the library feature is glitched. i wholeheartedly thank you for pocketing my latest on here. stay safe!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Haunting. Uncomfortable to read. You held the mirror up in front of us and forced us to take a good long look at an undeniable truth. Great imagery. A true work of art.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Stunningly exquisite, meaningful, & well-stated! Your point-of-view is a slap in the face, it's so fresh! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


Hello, Yumna! :)
Let's keep the moon from talking to the sun. Maybe we can get some brighter days.

Posted 7 Months Ago


This is unnervingly prophetic.

Well done in a bad way.

Posted 7 Months Ago


This is the most beautiful and the deepest one I have read in a while. Keep up the good work Dr. Kay.

Posted 7 Months Ago


As always, you see higher and clearer than mere words. Rather think you've set a few minds thinking and - that matters. Think at times, when the moon appears to have chunks taken from it.. it's remembering the meaning of 'empathy'.. Let's hope its tides will slowly, kindly, re.kindle its bounteous silver glow. We certainly need it.. and your words, dear Yumna.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Short but holds very deep meaning. It makes me think what the moon feels about us. I love the contrast situation you put here. There is a sigh of relief but then again it looks dispirited when it gazes down at the Earth.
A striking piece.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Yep, if only we could resore or earth impressions, this poem speaks volumes, with so little wording, very nicely done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


This poem is so perfect right now. It's sad but so lovely!

Posted 8 Months Ago



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