Lunar || Remnants

Lunar || Remnants

A Poem by Dr. YumnaKay
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Late night scribbles.

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Tonight
the moon exhaled
a sigh of relief.

How unbearable it had been,
gazing down at the Earth,
and what now remains of it...

© 2020 Dr. YumnaKay


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Stunningly exquisite, meaningful, & well-stated! Your point-of-view is a slap in the face, it's so fresh! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


Hello, Yumna! :)
Let's keep the moon from talking to the sun. Maybe we can get some brighter days.

Posted 1 Week Ago


This is unnervingly prophetic.

Well done in a bad way.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


This is the most beautiful and the deepest one I have read in a while. Keep up the good work Dr. Kay.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


As always, you see higher and clearer than mere words. Rather think you've set a few minds thinking and - that matters. Think at times, when the moon appears to have chunks taken from it.. it's remembering the meaning of 'empathy'.. Let's hope its tides will slowly, kindly, re.kindle its bounteous silver glow. We certainly need it.. and your words, dear Yumna.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Short but holds very deep meaning. It makes me think what the moon feels about us. I love the contrast situation you put here. There is a sigh of relief but then again it looks dispirited when it gazes down at the Earth.
A striking piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Yep, if only we could resore or earth impressions, this poem speaks volumes, with so little wording, very nicely done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


This poem is so perfect right now. It's sad but so lovely!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Indeed, the moon must lament at earth's state and I with it, because I just love the moon. Beautiful poetry!

Posted 2 Months Ago


A fine little piece of brevity. It is good to see you posting Dr Y. I am pleased to think that the moon thinks there is some hope. I am trying to remain positive, but we live in challenging times.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago



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